what's the point ?
It's too short ! The file is too big ! The story is .. hum ... there is no story.
I didn't blamed it because it look like you worked on it, but there are bugs (imposibile to read the last text, put a STOP command oon your .fla)
Graphics are quite good, but the animation is bad. + it's hard to do after "perfect kirby" a movie staring kirby who don't look crapy ...
So keep working and good luck